I change my outfit three times. I’m not sure what to wear. Something slimming always because she is not one who held respect for women she calls “big girls.” I don’t know why I still worry about her opinion but I do. She once called my sister fat while fitting her wedding dress.

I put on some makeup and cover some zits and the dark circles under my eyes to the best of my abilities. I am looking tired. I sponge a spot on my top hoping that it is only water and won’t leave a noticeable stain. My hair looks greasy so I spray it with dry shampoo and work it into the roots. I still expect these things to be noticed the same way she always pointed out the flaws of wrinkled clothes, marks on the walls of my home and pimples on my skin as if I didn’t know these things were there. I grew to be anal and way too detailed oriented. In some ways, I became too much like her.

I am getting ready to visit my mother, something I only do every few months. I am not what one would call a good daughter. I used to be when I was younger. I was her favourite once. That was when I could still be molded by guilt and before I struggled for my independence. Being her favourite is a tough position. I feel for my younger brother as he has held that exhausting job for years.

I put my armor on by going into defense mode, which for me unfortunately has become offence mode as I anticipate scenarios and responses and feel the anger rise inside me as all the words and actions of the past come back to bolster my facade. When she said she wasn’t sure she would come to my wedding because I wasn’t travelling home to get married in her back yard. All the times she told me that I spoiled my son and spent too much time with him. Something she assured me I would regret later. I did not. When she would drop birthday gifts off at the door for my son but couldn’t bother coming in to watch him open them. All the times she dismissed my son and my husband as not important enough to make an effort for. When she attended my son’s graduation from high school along with my husband’s mom, a wonderful women that I had a great relationship with and who she had met on many occasions but deliberately ignored for over three hours on this one as they sat side by side. These are just some the things that can’t be buried.

It is hot and humid when I arrive for my visit. The air in the house is warm and thick. I feel it immediately and tie my hair back in an attempt to stay cool. There is a small fan sitting on a stool on the other side of the room, and I ask if I can turn it on. It helps a bit. My mother sits in her wheelchair in layers of polyester that cover her arms and her neck so that her ninety-two year old body is not on display. I feel warmer just looking at her. 

We chat for a bit, mostly small talk. A short conversation about a visit from her brothers. Another about my brother who she lives with. Mostly she talks about the weather and all the little things wrong with the rental house that they live in. She comments on these things as she rolls around in her wheelchair adjusting the hang of a curtain or the position of the garbage bag in the flip-up trash can. Pretty much the same actions and the same conversations as most visits.

We have a snack and I show her photos of my garden and the repaired lower level of our house. I usually try to bring something to show her as it makes things much easier. I had also brought her some books as reading and crosswords are her only pastimes. 

I wait for some comment, something to say she has noticed one of my many flaws, but there is none. There hasn’t really been any for a couple of years. Instead something else happens. In this house where her things never appear to be at home, where pictures hang crooked and my flip flops stick to the floor, I smell my mother’s body odor for the first time in my life. 

And you would think that now, since this frail woman is no longer the fastidious person that she once was and perfection for her is only a distant dream, you would think I could let things go. Perhaps forgive and forget. And I have tried, I really have; but every time I prepare for a visit, it all comes back.

Thank you for reading. 

Photos:  Jenn Stone

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  1. She sounds to have had a sad life as picking up other’s faults I think is a sign of unhappiness in yourself. Not sure whether it’s better or worse for her now but I suppose probably worse.

    I’ve enjoyed reading your posts but have just conracted Covid and gone more or less blind so time will tell if I get my sight back properly or not. If not I’ll probably have to stop reading stuff online as it’s too hard. Luckily I can touchtype…


      1. with my small amount of eyesight, I’m googling ‘Covid’ and my symptoms and, despite that the hospital have signed me off as unknown problem, others have been to the NHS with the same problem and been fixed. Some printing out to do I think!

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          1. I was googling it last night (took a lot of peering at the screen) but found it’s quite common for this to happen. I found a British Medical Journal report and one from two neurologists trying to make the medical profession in general aware of the fact and have printed them both off to take places with me! I’m due to see a doctor on Saturday if I stop being Covid positive but don’t think I’ll be able to go. If not, it’s a telephone appointment on Wednesday but just with the normal GP doctors who know nothing about eyes etc. really…

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  2. I think it’s natural that we fall back into the old feelings and responses and hear the old cassette tapes in our heads when meeting up with someone with whom we’ve always had a hard relationship, especially when that someone is in the family. the way you have described this is so raw and honest and poignant, and it is very powerful.

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  3. The honesty of this piece is so powerful and tangible. (The final paragraph is especially compelling.) I know full well what it’s like being on the “never good enough” end of a parental relationship, to the point that I had to severe that long-fractured connection. You are at least still trying, albeit reluctantly, and good on ya for that…

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  4. This is so sad to read, but so wonderfully and poignantly written. The first post that I read from you dealt with this very same subject and I still remember it very vividly. I couldn’t help wondering if any of these feelings exists in my own daughter’s minds…

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  5. It’s hard to let go of all that history. I love the honesty in this post. Guilt has a way of surfacing at the most inopportune times, even when it’s totally undeserved.

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  6. Mothers aren’t always loving, kind, or even ‘maternal’. Your experience of her is authentic, & thank you for your courage in sharing that here. My Mum and I had a very difficult relationship for years (like, 45 years!), but as she began to decline with dementia, she forgot how stressful we found each other (& I practiced “letting go” as much as I could), so our last decade was our best. And now she’s dead, so I just remember all the good bits, and dissolve the negative that doesn’t serve me (or her). I respect your honesty & bravery & compassion 🙏🏼 G

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    1. I agree. Some mothers aren’t natural mothers. We started out ok but declined when I wanted to be my own person. That was over 40 years ago. She doesn’t remember most of what she said or did anymore but I still do, and although I am patient with her I will never forget.

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  7. What an honest, beautiful but hard to read post. It made me sad for you but then glad that you became strong and independent because of or despite of your mom. Maybe the negative comments were the only way she knew how to express her love, but sounds like you learned better communication.

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  8. Thanks of sharing what is a poignant look into your life. I get what you’re saying, mothers get inside your mind, that’s for sure. In my experience, no matter how much I’ve evolved and grown as an adult, my mother’s voice is still in there spreading doubt. Maybe they mean well, but it doesn’t always translate.

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